A teen romance of epic proportions… without vampires

Hero-Perry-MoorePerry Moore’s HERO is easily one of the best books I’ve read lately.

Along with some excellent plot twists, there are a couple major plot holes — Moore hangs a lantern on one by having the hero comment in passing on the fundamental stupidity of the villain’s plot — but I barely noticed because I was having so much fun reading it.

Like a few other books I’ve read lately, it’s a non-graphic novel set in a version of the present in which superheroes and their organizations have for decades been a recognized part of America’s political and cultural landscape. The protagonist, Thom, is the son of a disgraced former hero and a mom who’s disappeared. And he’s got a couple of secrets…

Here are some things I loved about this book:

  • The characters. They’re working class, and their problems — from poverty to oppression to, you know, needing to save the world — are very real. Moore does a particularly good job with the hero’s father, whose principles and limitations are both portrayed to excellent effect.

    One of Moore’s best tricks is to repeatedly have his narrator-protagonist imagine what other characters’ experience of something (e.g., the moment when they make an unpleasant discovery) must have been. It could easily have been abused, but as Moore does it, it’s a nice way to create a vivid sense of some of the book’s other characters, while also conveying our hero’s sense of empathy. It helps that Moore employs this only for particularly painful moments. What’s a better way to make you care for a character than helping you imagine in detail the indignities they face?

    There were some unexpected sucker-punches (in the best way) — including one passage that I loved for indirectly making the parallel between LGBT civil rights today and interracial marriage in the past.

  • The voice. I wasn’t surprised to see that Moore works in movies, because I thought a lot of the dialogue and fight scenes were crafted with a future movie option in mind (“‘Mind control.’ Dad sighed and shook his head. ‘I hate mind control.’”) — then I wondered if, actually, the book is just written like a comic. I haven’t read enough comics to know.
  • And, of course… the romance. Moore follows a superhero trope where we readers know right away who the real-life love interest is when he puts his mask on, but the main character takes a million years to catch on. (My dad and I used to watch LOIS & CLARK together when I was little, and our favorite episode was when a villain asked Lois if she was “galactically stupid” for never having noticed that Clark… is… Superman.) What kept this from being tiresome is how utterly savorable the romance was.

    Here’s just one passage that made me fall in love with our hero, and thus cheer him on in his efforts to find love of his own:

    We drove in silence. I didn’t like the empty space. I wanted to tell him that I’d take him to dinner and get to know him, and that even though I didn’t have a lot of money, I’d find a nice pizza joint and we’d both have fun. I wanted to tell him to drive us straight to the beach and we could check into a motel and talk all night and walk by the ocean until the sun came up.

    But I guess if you don’t really feel that for someone, you shouldn’t say it. I wasn’t saying it to him, and he wasn’t saying it to me, either.

    I had those feelings for someone else.

    That’s what I’m talking about, people. If you haven’t read this one, consider doing so at your earliest opportunity.

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17 Responses to “A teen romance of epic proportions… without vampires”

  1. Sadako Says:

    The excerpt was great. It looks like a fun read. And yay, no pesky vampires!

  2. wereviking Says:

    Thanks for the reading tip. Always on the hunt for this sort of stuff.

    Zephyr — a superhero webcomic in prose
    http://wereviking.wordpress.com

  3. Elizabeth Says:

    If you do read it, come back and let us know what you think!

  4. Lenore Says:

    oooh! Sounds like a good one. Adding to wishlist now…

  5. Alex Says:

    Great post – Just subscriped to your RSS feed.. Thanks

  6. Rhiannon Hart Says:

    I felt the same way when reading Unwind by Neal Shusterman. It was so very film-ish. Turns out Shusterman is a screenwriter so he probably can’t help writing that way, but the style did annoy me a little.

  7. Elizabeth Says:

    I actually liked the cinematicness of HERO… but then, I used to read books about screenwriting and TV-writing (I went through a years-long phase, in college, of fantasizing about writing a TV show, even though I knew I never would), so it may be that I enjoy recognizing those elements of the way a scene is constructed.

    Actually, it was in many ways analyzing TV that first taught me to analyze fiction; I haven’t taken a lit class since my junior year of high school and I rarely read the books then, but I learned to think about how stories are put together first from my MY SO-CALLED LIFE fan listserv, and then from Television Without Pity.

    I should check out UNWIND.

  8. Jennifer Hubbard Says:

    Oh, yes, do read UNWIND!

  9. Nicki Says:

    I tried to read this about a year ago but couldn’t get past the terrible writing. sigh. Too bad… sounds like it was interesting.

  10. Elizabeth Says:

    Okay, UNWIND is definitely going on the list.

    Nicki: I have an amazing tolerance of certain kinds of bad writing… as long as I really care about the characters. For that matter, I can overlook a lot for a really cool plot, too. I usually just need ONE thing to really love about a book.

  11. perry moore, author of hero Says:

    Hi, all,

    I just wanted to say thank you. I am honored and humbled to have you talk about my novel HERO. There were so many deep issues — many of them autobiographical — running through my head and heart as I wrote the book.

    Do please give it a chance. It may not be your cup of tea, but judging by the two-thousand letters I’ve received on my fan site, HERO has largely struck a similar chord with a lot of readers, inspired quite a few, and fortunately, kept quite a few off of the ledge.

    Like I said, the intelligent discussion and excellent coverage on this site makes me feel like HERO succeeds on some level just by making it to your radar.

    One of the most humbling joys in writing the novel is connecting with the reader personally. I read each and every e-mail sent to me, and try my best to answer all of them.

    So please feel free to e-mail me with any thoughts, questions, things you’d like to see in the sequel or series, casting ideas for the Showtime show with Stan Lee producing, or anything else you can think of. It would be my genuine and modest pleasure to respond.

    You can write me at perrymoorestories@gmail.com

    I hope to hear from you.

    All my best, and a sincere thank you for taking the time to discuss HERO. I sincerely believe there’s a HERO in all of us. I can’t wait to be reading all of your books, the future heroes and writers of tomorrow!

    Perry Moore,
    author of HERO
    perrymoorestories@gmail.com

  12. perry moore, author of hero Says:

    Hi , again, it’s Perry,

    Sorry, I wanted to include this in my prior e-mail:

    If you have any other favorite passages from the book, please let me know. There are many who like the part when Ruth tells Thom it’s time to start living his life now–that this isn’t a preamble to a greater life. I’m personally guilty of that, and still try to listen to Ruth’s words of wisdom.

    Just to have you mention that you even have a favorite passage has inspired me in a way an author rarely gets the chance to express–incredible gratitude.

    It really helps, the encouragement, as I enter the homestretch of my next novel: “WAY OF THE WOLF, BOOK ONE: FIRE.”

    Thank you again for all your thoughtful consideration. What an honor to appear on this site!

    Best wishes,
    Perry Moore,
    author of HERO
    perrymoorestories@gmail.com

  13. andrew f Says:

    I loved ththe book hero it was so good

  14. andrew f Says:

    did any one who liked it have a favoite part my favorite part was when goran gave thom his dads mask.

  15. perry moore, author of hero Says:

    Dear Andrew,
    I’m glad you liked that last bit with Hal’s mask. It was a last minute switch for something else that Goran was to give Thom in the box. Never felt right, and then it struck me — or more likely, Goran told me what he would have really done.
    Thanks for making me think I made the right decision (which is always to listen to the character!
    Best,
    Perry Moore
    author or HERO

  16. Elizabeth Says:

    Perry: I’d love to know what you were originally planning! I understand if you don’t want to say, but I always love hearing things like that about the writing process.

  17. evan Says:

    i read the book and im using it for my project in health it is great and this is homage to a unsually good book.


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